Amendment To Bad Hair Day
Made a minor change to one of my poem, "Bad Hair Day", which I wrote a few months back. Changed the verse "The guitar is the pride, the long hair's the dye" to "The guitar is the dye, the long hair's the pride". Yeah, you may think I bo liao enough but I just felt that the latter verse sounds a lot better and means a lot deeper (for me to remember maybe). As long as I know what the new change means.
Anyway, will be finishing another poem soon... It SHOULD be called "A Bolt From The Sky". Quite an optimistic poem.. hee hee.. that's how my mood was when I wrote it.
Anyway, will be finishing another poem soon... It SHOULD be called "A Bolt From The Sky". Quite an optimistic poem.. hee hee.. that's how my mood was when I wrote it.
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