A Change In The Tattoo

Finish a poem finally.. not very satisfy with it though but nevertheless, it's completed. This piece doesn't seem to fit very well. Some strange syllabus phrasing you see... I may edit it further more again... It's called "A Change In The Tattoo", not "A Bolt From The Blue" no more. The latter just couldn't fit in.

It's those type of poem that encourages people. That's very not like what I always wrote. Anyway, do give comments about it... I really had a hard time writing anything now. Rusting and drying...

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