Wednesday, May 03, 2006

Version 2

This is not the first time... I changed the poem again. I hope it could only get better. The first and the previous one simply doesn't sound right... The first, after reading it the next day I finish it, I found out that there's totally nothing inside... All the message and feeling I want to say... nothing is inside.

The previous one, getting better, starting to make some sense but not enough. I wanted to say more. I wanted to put everything and every message in my mind into this one piece of poem and close it permanently...

Here's the final version, I hope... so here goes, See You Again

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Blogger cl0udi3 said...

finally an entry not related to any goals. :D

Thursday, May 04, 2006 1:45:00 PM  

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